高考英语读后续写抢分特辑 | 陪你到最后一刻
读后续写
●这个动作什么时候发生？
①现在，立刻，马上
immediately
in a flash
at that moment
without delay /without hesitation
②然后
...（and）then.../afterwards
after that /later on
before long,...很快
□Before long, an ambulance arrived !
it wasn't long before an ambulance arrived!
Finally,.../Eventually,...
③每天起床第一句
early in the morning
the next morning/ day/week
♥一...就...
○the moment/second+句子
○On/Upon doing sth,...
□The moment we arrived at the farm,
On/Upon arriving at the farm ,what came into sight were varieties of fresh vegetables and fruit trees.
○Hardly had A done sth when B did sth.
[A动作稍微早于B动作]
○No sooner...(部分倒装)...than...
♥突然
○A was doing sth,when B did sth
(A正在做某事，突然B...)
○A was about to do sth,when B did sth.
(A正要做某事，突然B...)
□I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around when something unpleasant caught my eye.
□I was about to leave when something unpleasant caught my eye.
●真善美的结局
（1）幡然醒悟，花式realize,告别一"I"到底
根据文章主旨选择醒悟的道理
*经历作主语
□This special experience in someone else's room made me realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.
*主从作主语
□What happened that day made me realize that forgiveness is a kind of virtue.
□It was the special experience that made me realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.
*倒装句
□Not until then did I realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.
□Only then did I realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.
继续升级
*强调句+状从
□Now I'm proud of what I look like and much happier because I have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are.（人与自我）可切换第三人称
某人幡然醒悟，灵机一动
*It suddenly dawned on me that...
*Only then did it dawn on me that ...
（2）From then on,落实行动
□From then on, I would try my best to help people like ...Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.
→转换视角
□From then on,Bernard made up his mind to help someone who needs help. Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.
→同义替换
□From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that Mexican family offered me.
（3）睹“物”思人，情感升华
▲Seeing sth,I felt as if it had been doing and saying,"..."
□Seeing the prize again,I felt as if it had been smiling,encouraging/comforting/inspiring/reminding me and saying,"it's never too late to learn".
Remember
*状从和主从
状从
主从
□What I will remember forever are inspiring words of wisdom outside the headmaster's office ,which made me understand it's up to me to change my environment.
升级
▲I keep the little plane as a reminder of my daughter's love and also, the power of words.
温情类故事怎么办？
笑声回荡
□The room echoed with our happy laughter.
□All of them laughed with happiness, the laughter echoing in the room.（独立主格表伴随状语）笑声回荡在房间里
情景交融
□The warm golden sunlight ,flooding in through the window, together with love between my family, warmed us up.
p.s. 一束光a beam of/a shaft of sunlight
□Cold as the weather was,deep in the heart was full of warmth.she would let go of her fear and...not only for... but more importantly, for herself.
（在寒冷的冬天，一个人抛开她曾经的恐惧，紧张，自卑，决定为自己而活，重拾信心和温暖）
S□
Still,every Christmas Eve,my daughters and I talked about the unexpected joy that Christmas tree had brought us and about the special childhood memorises at that time.
意外惊喜人人爱
（Much/Greatly）to my □surprise/relief/regret,he got full marks in the exam.
□What surprised me was that she got full marks in the exam.
前因后果非谓语
□Seeing his husband chatting with a beautiful girl ,she felt a great sense of jealously welling up in her heart and surging through her.
□Jane felt a great sense of jealously welling up in her heart and surging through her,throwing the book at the girl.
特殊倒装显意志
□Tired as we were, we had great fun and a sense of achievement.
□Exhausted as she was, she still kept yelling at the top of her lung.
责备感谢皆虚拟
▲If I hadn't quarreled with Tom, I wouldn't have to be here.
▲But for my mom's absent mind we couldn't have so many unexpected amusing suprises during the trip.
