【雅思总分9斯坦福学长】7节课突破雅思小作文7分 - IELTS Writing


简明且可复原
不给观点
3 or 4 paragraphs
170-220 words
P2 Dynamic Charts

Summary
The line graph demonstrates the main motivations people expressed for relocating to countryside from the urban area of a capital city in 1990, 2000 and 2010. The years witnessed a large number of people moving away.
注意时态
同义替换
横轴+纵轴
Group 1


KEY FEATURES
beginnings, ends, turning points, intersections, highs and lows
Group 2
共性和差别


相反方向变化,逐渐重合

动态表格

数据分组

柱状图

大部分题目可分为两组,有些或三组
常用词汇

例句:

- sub + verb +extent + change in date
The proportion of women engineers in aerospace rose consistently from 7% in 2009 to 21% in 2020.

2. Time + saw/witnessed a + extent + change in sub
The years between 1999 and 2009 saw a significant hike in Chan's GDP.

3. sub demonstrated / showed an upward / downward trend, increasing / decreasing form ... to ...
The number of visitors to the museum demonstrated an apparent upward trend, increasing from 71000 to 127000 from 2007 to 2015.

4. A + extent + change + can be seen in + sub, change in date
A slight dip can be seen in the quantity of fast food consumed, from 17 units person in 2019 to 15 units in 2021.

5. There was + extent + change in + sub, change in date
There was a slight dip in the quantity of fast food consumed, from 17 units person in 2019 to 15 units in 2021.

connections
before doing
The proportion of women engineers in aerospace rose consistently from 7% in 2009 to 21% in 2020, before a predicted to further hiking to 29% in 2025.
a predicted to further hiking:指向未来

connections
followed by
The proportion of women engineers in aerospace rose consistently from 7% in 2009 to 21% in 2020, followed by a predicted jump to 29% in 2025.
P2 Static Charts



关注主要的共性
图标呈现出什么用一般现在
Summery

Group 1
第一句解释为什么把数据单独列出说明

先叙述共性

单独罗列一个例外

Group 2

Pie Chart




表达方式

右边适合饼状图

重要是数据分类,groups 之间的不同点,group内的不同点

P3 Mixed Charts

Static + Static

不用刻意为数据分组
先对两张图标进行单独分析



Static + Dynamic

Dynamic + Dynamic


两张图各自描述清楚,在结尾描述connections(中间就发现了,可在描述图标时写connections and differences)
P4 maps

与图表的要求一样

第一步:挑一个合适参考点
第二步:最主要的变化
第三步:其他变化

交叉路到环行路变化(一定要特别熟悉)
主要变化:功能变化、占地大
商业、农业、工业、居民

先写一个framework 之后分析出变化后再加conclusion


蓝字,地图上没有发生变化的地方以补充的方式进行说明(省字)


深蓝和淡蓝觉得难写进,可另起一段


indoor
1、站在中间(推荐)
2、从门口进去


表达方式:

P6 Flow charts
+++细节






用一种写作方式(推荐下面的写作方式)
