七七 | 读后续写抓破头？电影式万能结构

1️⃣读什么

5W1H、主旨

确定主角

明确问题

解决问题

人与社会

人与自我

人与自然

2️⃣续什么

情节

好故事来源于结构

冲突

反应

• 万能的情感线
• 变换的动作线

尝试

• 自身努力 或借助环境 / 工具
• 危机暂缓 或 尝试失败

转折

• 灵机一动
• 关键人 / 物

解决

反应→尝试→转折→解决

But no helicopters came and it was qetting dark again.

①A wave of terror swept over her.

• sweep over：扫过
• 反应：情感线

②Her heart pounding fiercely and her palm sweating, an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place.

• v. 砰砰地跳
• 尝试：自我鼓励

③Tired and terrified as she was, Jane plucked her courage to feel the way.

• plucked her courage：鼓起勇气
• 尝试：危机暂缓

④Luckily, it didn't take long before she found a cave.

• 尝试：危机暂缓

⑤Sighing with relief, she felt a glimmer of hope, saying to herself."Tomorrow is another day."

• a glimmer of hope：一丝希望
• 反应：情感线

⑥With that, she went to sleep, in whose dream her husband kept her company.

• 衔接

lt was daybreak when Jane woke up.

①Hungry and disappointed, she found not any helicopter overhead, at a loss what to do.

• 反应：情感线

②lt suddenly dawned on her that she should find a big open area first.

• 转折：灵机一动

③Having gobbling down some blackberries, she can't wait to set off.

• gobbling down：狼吞虎咽
• 转折：关键事物

④After what seemed a century, such an area did come into sight.

• 反应：情感线

⑤Her face brightened up.

• 反应：情感线

⑥Meanwhile, a helicopter was flying towards her.

• 转折：关键事物

⑦Upon its landing, out dashed her husband who hugged Jane tightly, tears welling up in their heart.

• dash：冲
• 解决

⑧lt was at the moment that they decided not to quarrel any more but learned to compromise.

• quarrel：v. 争吵
• compromise：v. 妥协
• 点睛收尾

The car abruptly stopped in front of him.

①Seeing the car stop, Mac jumped off his bicycle immediately and rushed tothe door of the car.

• 衔接
• 反应：Mac动作线
• 尝试：上车求援

②So frightened was he that he hardly said a whole sentence, but stammered,"the wolf, please let me in."

• stammer：v. 结结巴巴地说
• 反应：情感线

③Seeing the wolf running towards the car, Paul opened the door without any hesitation, pulling Mac into the car.

• 反应：Paul动作线
• 尝试：危机暂缓

④Three men in the car were staring out of the window and saw the wolfstanding there, thinking how to fight back the wolf.

• stare out：向外凝视
• 衔接

A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.

①About a hundred meters away, the two men stopped and realized what had happened to their friend.

• 衔接

②Being aware of the wolfs cruelty and not to startle the wolf, they were determinedto stay where they were and attempted to think out an idea.

• cruelty：n. 残酷
• startle：v. 使受惊
• 反应：动作线

③suddenly, one of the cyclists touched the food bag which they brought.

• 转机：关键人物

④Agood idea occurred to him that they could lead the wolf to the forest by throwing their beef and pork away.

• 转机：灵机一动

⑤Smelling the flavor of the meat, the wolf turned around and ran alongside the meat.

⑥The two cyclists u-turned in a crossroads.

• 解决！

⑦What comforted the two cyclists was that Mac did not get injured.

• comfort：安慰

⑧"Thank you tor stopping to save me, said Mac to paul and Becky.

• 自然结尾

⑨Mac and his two friends decided to go back home in case they would run into the wolf again.

3️⃣续写内容拆解

好故事来源于好结构

Para 1

• 反应：情感线 / 动作线
• 尝试：
• 自身 / 外在
• 暂缓 / 失败
• 衔接：第二段首句

Para 2

• 反应 / 衔接
• 转折 / 机
• 解决
• 点睛收尾

解决问题第一步：拆解问题

情绪描写

我害怕

• A wave of terror swept over her. Her heart pounding fiercely and her palm sweating, an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place.

我命由我不由天

• 人定胜天
• sb. could hardly wait to do sth
• without hesitation / delay / a second thought / even thinking
• pluck / gather up one's courage to do sth
• 鼓起勇气

天助我也

• To one's relief l surprise / delight，...
• 令某人欣慰/意外/开心的是
• Strangely enough, it turned out that ...
• Luckily, it didn't take long before sb. ...

灵机一动

• it做主语
• It suddenly occurred to sb. that...
• It struck sb. that...
• lt hit sb. that...
• It dawned on sb. that...
• 使开始明白/理解
• 物做主语
• （A / An idea, thought..）occurred / came to sb. that...
• …came / flashed into one's mind.
• ... crowded in one's mind.

升华点睛

• 我悟了
• Not until then did sb. realize / notice that…
• It was not until then that sb. realized that…
• This special experience in ... made me realize that...
• 妙啊
• What a / an valuable / useful / great / painful lesson sb. taught me！
• sb. learned from sb！
• What a / an thrilling / pleasant / unforgettable / memorable experience sb had！

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.

①lnstinctively, l yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature.

• lnstinctively adv. 本能地
• reins n. 缰绳
• 我的反应：动作线

②Badly startled by the sudden incident, the horse sped off the track into another direction.

• sped v. 加速，飞驰
• 马的反应：动作线

③Dad followed closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe（安慰）the terrified horse and l did as told.

• 爸爸的反应：动作线

④Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.

• 尝试：危机暂缓
• 衔接

We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.

①Wandering around, we were still stuck in the dilemma.

• dilemma n. 困境
• 衔接

②Much to our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the riverbank.

• 转折：关键事物

③Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that.

• propose v. 提议，建议
• 转折：灵机一动

④Time appeared to be merrier and shorter when l stayed together with Dad and before long, the farm house came into sight.

• 解决

⑤What a thrilling but memorable experience it was!

• thrill v. 激动人心的
• 点睛收尾

4️⃣写什么

先写对：简单中文→英式中文→正确英文

再写美：词的升级→句式的升级