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这是我个人的参赛作品（付中英文对照），如果有兴趣掺和其中的话可以做个参考

Synopsis（概要）：

An Aurora Chapter strike force is sent to retake an Industrial World that has been instigated by a Word-Bearer Warband. Firstborn Marine Erilis and Primaris Marine Dorren are assigned together to the strike force. Although they are good commanders of the chapter’s mighty battle tanks, they have different ideas about the Chapter’s vehicles: Erilis thinks that each battle tank represents the history of the chapter as Dreadnoughts, But Dorren just treats them as tools and weapons which can win the war. However, they still have duties with them except arguing with each other’s viewpoints: defeating traitors and their followers that already armed teeth by world’s stock.

一支曙光女神战团的打击部队被派去夺回一个在怀言者战帮煽动下叛乱的工业世界。长子星际战士艾瑞利斯和原铸星际战士多瑞恩都在这支部队当中作战，虽然他们都是战团强大的战斗坦克的指挥官，但他们对战团载具的态度却是天差地别：艾瑞利斯认为每一辆战斗坦克都和无畏一样是战团历史的标志；而多瑞恩只把它们当成赢得战争胜利的工具和武器。然而除了就彼此的观点展开争论外，他们依然有使命在身：击败叛徒和他们通过世界库存武装到牙齿的追随者。

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“他们正在靠近，但愿你已经想好了你的作战计划‘考尔的杰作’。”

艾瑞利斯有意加重了后半句话的发音，让那个有些侮辱性的外号听起来更加刺耳了。

“那个家伙在挑衅我，”多瑞恩想到，“他希望通过这种举动让我犯错，蒙羞，从而证明他要比我更强。”

他没有回应艾瑞利斯的挑衅，只是操控着车辆继续沿着道路向前驶去。“基里曼之锤”号巨大的身躯推开了烧得漆黑的车辆残骸，它来到了一座工坊建筑旁边打开了舱门，让仲裁者小队赶紧去寻找这座工业园区的控制中心。

多瑞恩有理由相信艾瑞利斯和他的“奥特拉玛的骄傲”号也在做和他一样的部署，兰德袭击者一定也和他一样找地方卸下了致命的乘客去执行他们的任务，并准备和即将到来的叛军交火。

随着鸟卜仪发出了刺耳的警告声，多瑞恩明白他们的猎物已经来了。

叛徒出动了两个连的黎曼鲁斯坦克和少量的步兵来对付他们，他们的指挥官可能过度迷信了数字的力量：工业园区狭窄的通道并不适合大量部署装甲部队，如果他们觉得十八辆黎曼鲁斯就能摧毁一辆兰德袭击者和一辆反击者处决者的话，他们就大错特错了。

多瑞恩从显示屏上看到了他的目标，其中一个中队排成了一列行驶在道路上，它们的武器紧张的指向了道路两侧。“不错的战术素质，”多瑞恩在心里评价道，“但战场上要掌握的远不止理论知识那么简单。”

“基里曼之锤”号在一个岔路口的建筑后面等待着它的猎物，它的重型激光毁灭者已经充能完毕，就等敌人上钩了。

当反击者处决者从那座工坊后面钻出来的时候，那三辆黎曼鲁斯甚至没来得及调转它们的炮塔。

炽烈的激光束从炮管内射出将三辆坦克打了个对穿，尽管黎曼鲁斯的正面装甲是最坚固的，但这不代表它也能挡住一发能熔化泰坦装甲的攻击。

“三辆。”多瑞恩在心里记着数，然后操控着战车转向去寻找其他的敌人。

他的鸟卜仪读取到了另外一个中队的信号，但它们的符文标记很快就消失在了屏幕上，与之一起发生的是另一个出现在它们位置的友军符文标记，一个多瑞恩再熟悉不过的标记。

“我还以为你们在火星睡觉的时候能多学点东西呢，这是我干掉的第二支中队，别落后太多哦。”

“我们来比试一场吧，原铸，看谁能取得更多的击杀，倘若你赢了，我会就之前的态度向你道歉，可如果你输了...”

“希望你能学会尊重战团的传统，而不是拿傲慢的考尔思维去玷污它。”

说到这里，艾瑞利斯的语气也变得严肃了起来。

“那就试试看吧。”多瑞恩回答道。

两辆钢铁巨兽再一次分开去寻找各自的目标。

"They're approaching. I hope you've got your battle plan 'Cawl's Masterpiece.'"

Erilis accentuated the latter part of the sentence, making the somewhat insulting nickname even harsher.

"That fellow is provoking me," thought Dorren. "By doing so, he hopes to make me wrong and dishonour, and prove that he is better than me."

He did not respond to Erilis's defiance but steered the vehicle along the road. The massive body of Repulsor Executioner Guilliman's Hammer pushed through the blackened wreckage of the vehicle. It reached a workshop building and opened the hatch, sending an intercessor squad getting off the vehicle to find the industrial complex's control centre.

Dorren has reason to believe that Erilis and his vehicle Pride of Ultramar were doing the same, the land raider must have found a place to unload its deadly passengers to carry out their mission and prepare for a firefight with the incoming rebels.

With the shrill warning of the auspex, Dorren knows that their prey is coming.

Two companies of Leman Russ tanks with supporter infantries are deployed against them. Their commanders may have been overly convinced of the power of numbers: the narrow corridors of the industrial park are not suitable for the deployment of large numbers of armour squadrons, and if they think that eighteen Leman Russ could destroy a Land Raider and a Repulsor Executioner, they make a big mistake.

Dorren finds his target on the screen. One of the squadrons is lined up on the road, their weapons pointing nervously to the sides. "Good tactical qualities," Dorren mentally commented, "but there's more to the battlefield than theory."

The Guilliman's Hammer waits for its prey behind a building at a fork in the road, its heavy laser destroyers already fully charged, waiting for the enemy to bite.

The three Leman Russ tanks just have time to turn their turrets when the Repulsor Executioner emerged from behind the workshop.

The blazing laser beam from the barrel pierced the three tanks. Although Leman Russ's frontal armour provides the best protection for it, it doesn't mean that it is able to block a single shot that would melt a Titan's armour.

"Three." Dorren made a mental note of the number, then steers his vehicle away in search of other enemies.

His aspuex picks up another squadron's signal, but their rune mark soon disappears from the screen, along with another ally rune mark in their place, one that Dorren knows all too well.

"I thought you'd learn more while you slept on Mars. This is the second squadron I've killed. Don't fall too far behind."

"Let's have a contest, Primaris, to see who can score more kills. If you win, I'll apologize for my attitude, but if you lose..."

"Let's hope you learn to respect the chapter's tradition, rather than tarnish it with arrogant Cawl thinking."

Here,Erilis's tone turns serious.

"Try it, then." "Dorren replied.

Once again, the two steel beasts split up in search of their respective targets.

一些诀窍和窍门：

如果你实在是个英语苦手，那么可以考虑用机翻软件来帮忙写作。

首先把所有的人名和GW语用单独的大写字母代替，然后写文（最好是一句话而不是一整段，不然翻译软件会开始抽风），在校对完成后再把人名和GW术语放进去即可。

当然记得字数，概要部分100词，摘要500词，最好是写个战斗场景+人物对话即可。