小作文整理(地图题+语料库整理)
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton,and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
单词积累:now(题目中)=current planned future development(题目中)=proposed layout after redevelpoment farmland(题目中)=farm field traffic/transportion system交通系统 extend扩张 add to增加 residential buildings住宅区 relative facilities相关设施 satisfy citizen's need满足居民需求 be located/situated in the+方位+of +地点 坐落于某个地点的某个方位 revamp改造 make way让路 (an)advanced road system先进的道路系统 reduce size缩小规模 allow more space for...为......腾出空间 residential constructions住宅建设 句型:The maps illustrate some proposed to+地点+时间. Overall,... It can be seen that... It is noticeable that... sth. can currently be found on the+sp. 连接词:However...;Besides...;As well asA,B...... The maps illustrate the current industrial area of Norbition,as well as proposed layout after redevelopment.(第一段改写题目) Overall, it can be seen that the traffic system in the area will extend northward and westward, adding more extensions to the existing system. It is also noticeable that residential buildings with relative facilities will replace the factories to satisfy citizen's need.(总写变化) 分段:通常一个图一段 Currently, a number of factories are located in center of Norbiton.In addition,a farm field can currently be found on the north side of a river.There is not any residential constructions on the map.(现在的布局) After revamping, the area expected to make way for facilities including housing, playgrounds, schools, shops and medical centers, which will be connected via an advanced road systems.As well as facilities, the transportation system would be northward to the river, thus reduce the farmland's side and allowing more space.(改造之后,根据第一幅图的顺序)