「读后续写」情节翻译不了一点？收好18字口诀，告别中式英文！丨手把手教你“写对句

七七 | 如何“翻译”中文情节

1️⃣如何快速消灭中式英语

一个简单句有且只能有一个谓语动词。

翻译：今天这视频有奸多人看。这个老师肯定讲得很好！

• 转化：好多人看这个视频因为这个老师教得很好！
• Many students are watching this video because the teacher teaches well.
• 转化：好多人看这个视频所以我猜这个老师教得很好!
• Many students are watching this video so I guess (that) the teacher teaches well.

很多：A lot of / a number of / plenty of / millions of

1. 英文一定要有明确且准确的动作发出者（主语）
2. 英文需要连词来衔接句子，呈现两句的逻辑

1. 9磅15便士不够买一件好衬衫。

You can't buy a good shirt with 9 pounds and 15 pence.

2. 山高人为峰。

When you climb to the top of the mountain you are / become the summit of the mountain.

3. 神农喝了几口，觉得很提神。

①After Shen Nong sipped the water, he felt refreshed.

②Shen Nong sipped the water and found it was refreshing.

take a few sips：浅尝几口

①Shen Nong took a few sips of the water and felt refreshed.

②Shen Nong took a few sips of the water and found it very refreshing.